Personal NPC and LORE inspired fantasy character builds

Creed’s Gift to Jane

The least Creed could do was to provide Jane with some rewards for her valour and tenacity. With the valuable materials gathered within the Necropolis, Creed tasked the Legion’s smith Hallena to utilise some of them to renovate Jane’s battle worn equipment.

Her father’s old axe was starting to lose it’s edge and the battered shield she found in Angrim’s junk yard was looking even more battered than ever.

Hallena forged, and attached a new head for her axe and completely overhauled the tired old shield.

The before and after photographs …
(Hallena actually made copies to advertise and promote her smithing business)

…BEFORE…
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…AFTER…
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Jane was more than happy with the results and immediately set forth to find a path to Malmouth and put them to the test with the anticipation of “Extreme Violence”…

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The road to Malmouth was far more dangerous than Jane had anticipated.

She did however manage to find and reunite with her friend Ulgrim on her journey. She always knew in the back of her mind that he was never actually dead.

Malmouth itself is a virtual disaster and grave challenges exist here to bring back order to the once great and prosperous city.

Forgemaster Kaylon in the Steelcap District did some wonderful new work on Jane’s equipment to help her get an advantage over these invading monsters.

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Will these upgrades actually be enough to defeat these fiends of Malmouth? …

She has always been envious of the many heroes she socialised with at her father’s kitchen at Devil’s Crossing, who had been able to study and train in the many masteries and skills that only wealthiest families could afford.

But, she has reached Malmouth using only her wits, natural abilities and (fortunately) some usable skills she managed to salvage from hard to find elusive magical items and strange shrines.

Ever resolute, she is determined to be ranked and recognised as a hero of Cairn on her own merits.

Flesh Shapers - here I come ! …

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quite good post.

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Man I’ve been sleeping on this hard. I gotta get back into it! This is a nice reminder! I hit a roadblock with my latest one, but I think I have just the thing to overcome it… I always love to see your stuff man, keep it coming!

Welcome to the forums, friend! I think youll find everyone her to be super awesome. @MikeHeydon gets bonus point for being the man behind this legendary post and its entire concept. This dude is crazy creative, check out his other posts as well, hes always coming up with great ideas!

Yea, I also have been busy with other characters, but eventually come back to Jane and her journey every now and again. I been following @Contragor with his project on classless to ULTIMATE in HC.

I thought I was patient and careful, but that guy takes the cake!. What he has achieved so far is little short of amazing. I have not even attempted this in HC yet as I do die sometimes to a one shot hit or being trapped despite my deliberate defensive play style.

@Contragor progress can be followed in his comments near the end of topic

The cake is yours, mate. You and @adoomgod inspired me to go for it. You also gave me the idea to work on the story. I haven’t revealed the lore part yet, but it’s there. There’s a plot and a few twists. I even got my daughter involved to make some of the artwork to match those twists. I just hope the char survives long enough…

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I’m telling you bud, if you want something closer to a guarantee just pick one of the 2 factions that doesn’t force you to fight the Temple of Osyr lightning mummy boss. Otherwise, if you do decide to fight him and survive then you’ve basically guaranteed you’ll make it.

Good luck.

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Totally agree, the first time I encountered that Lightning Mummy Boss my character just melted away and was a real “WTF just happened” moment for me. You really need beefed up lightning resists to tackle that boss and even then, you need to be able to take him down fast.

One of the nastier beasties creeping around in Grim Dawn in my opinion.

Solael is also probably one the most commonly chosen faction for first time players in Forgotten Gods as the vendor and the taskmaster is the closest to the portal. It definitely was for me.

Being a lot wiser, and also having access to Mandates for Solael, I now choose one of the other 2 factions by default for an easier and less stressful path in Forgotten Gods.

Yeah, it’s going to be “fun”. He has high resistance to acid/poison (my main damage). He is ranged, while my main damage is retal lol. He can lower your DA by 675! Means he can actually crit my char even with the endgame gear and stats. He can lower your resistances by 35. And the icing on the cake, he hits like a truck…

DEVON THORMANE’S TALE CONTINUES… WITH AN UNEXPECTED TWIST!

Having slain an entire landscape worth of Briarthorn, Thormane had collapsed where he stood, too exhausted to venture on without rest, and rest he did. Thormane slept soundly… Perhaps TOO soundly… When Thormane awoke, it was already mid-day. Hed apparently stripped down to his loincloth in his sleep, and slept all through the night. His whole body was sore and bloody, and he was dehydrated. The hot sun had been beating down on him for several hours, and wherever his body was not caked with blood and grime, it was soaked in sweat and seared from the rays of light. He quickly donned his clothes, grimacing at the pain of it against his sunburnt flesh. He needed that bath. And a good meal. He sat up, yawned, and stretched out his battered limbs. It was time to get back to it… But where did he leave his hammer… HIS HAMMER… IT WAS GONE!

Thormane whirled to and fro in a panic, spinning around in circles, checking under rotting corpses, looking behind nearby stones and trees as if the hammer walked off to find shade of its own accord… All to no avail. His hammer was indeed gone, stolen by god knows what… Thormane had grown attached to the weapon over his years in service to the realm. It had been forged for him by the Immortals, and was an honor to him, symbolic of his tenacity in its own way. He refused to let it go- so he made a side quest of his own priority above his current mission to discover Longshore’s fate- He would reclaim his forge-hammer.

Thormane spent the better part of the day investigating his surroundings for clues, eventually discovering a pair of hastily concealed tracks leading away from his makeshift campsite off in a direction opposite of Homestead. The tracks appeared to lead into the Pine Barrens… Home to many and more briarthorns, as well as numerous other dangers. Sick as he was of slaying the briar, Thormane refused to move on without his hammer, and so he set off into the Pine Barrens to find it…

Strange, losing a weapon like that. What manner of creature would take his hammer, yet leave him alive? The truth is, a great many heroes and villains inhabited Cairn, not all of them beasts and legends… Some of them, other survivors, just trying to find their way… Just trying to get by.

Getting by had always come easy to Nicholas, or Nicky, as he now fashioned himself. On the seas, he’d made a name for himself hunting pirates. He’d even claimed the Admiral’s Hat of Black Powderkeg Bart, one of the fiercest reavers ever to terrorize Cairn waters. It was on the seas that he also developed a taste for rum, for which he developed a love affair only challenged by his taste for women. Once he came of age and could no longer weather the storms of seafaring life, he sold his ship and used the funds to start his own business.

That business was a bar, and he named it “Freighters”, after the ships he loved so dearly. It was in this fashion that he got by yet again, running Freighters on land this time, with a big ol’ pirate hat mounted behind the counter, a surefire way to start a conversation. A surefire sign of history, something every successful bar needs- And Freighters became a modestly successful one at that- In the Capitol before it fell.

In the chaos of the Blackiron Docks, Nicky had managed to steal away like several other savvy entrepreneurs with enough of an opportunistic instinct to find the benefits of the apocalypse. He regretted running, and leaving it all behind… After all, he had built a small empire of especially… “needy”… Clientele. The most needy of which still told tales of Nicholas after he’d gone…

Nicky would never forget Garrund, after all he did for him, and had vowed to find him once again, if he was still alive. After all… He owed him more than booze for everything Garrund did for him back then…

Nicky had drifted off in his rickety boat, only coming to as it was nudged into consciousness by the shore, small rocks in the shallow water thumping off the hull, weeds rustling and water lapping at its sides. Ol’ Nicky “Rum Runner” Kotch stood up, and realized hed drifted into what looked like Arkovia…

He’d taken Black Bart’s hat with him, as well as his old sailing uniform. His trusty Oaken shield and Reaver’s sword. Now, the sword was just about useless in his hand. His sword arm had been wounded so bad in a raid against Pirates that it was only really good for appearances. He carried it in the hopes of being able to intimidate, perhaps avoiding a fight, as his true fighting days were done.

His shield arm, however, was still more than capable, and the Oaken shield he wielded was no ordinary shield. This particular shield had been enchanted by the Gildam Arcanum, as a sanctioned ceremoninial honor which had been presented to him on behalf of the Imperial Navy for his valiant efforts against the Pirate scourge some 40 years before the fall. The enchantment allowed the shield to absorb impacts, and blast kinetic energy out at the source, like a fiery backdraft. This was Nicky’s primary means of “getting by” now, until he could find himself a place to set-up a market… Hell, until he could even FIND a market to work with in these dark times… Booze was impossible, until he had the facilities required… And so it was that Nicky Kotch decided to scrounge up all the weapons and armor he could find. He would hold and sell, to the highest bidders and for the right prices… He would be an arms dealer!

DISCLAIMER: NICKY RUMRUNNER KOTCH IS A PACK MULE;
As I do not use Grim Stash, and have barely any inventory space in HC, and no high level HC characters- Havent even beaten Normal/Vet in HC yet, and my highest level is a 40- I created Nicky as a means to help my story driven classless builds journey. He will operate as a gear holder, farmer, and money maker. That is his only function. It is for this reason that I have allowed him to utilize classes, however he is restricted to no offensive skills, and is only allowed to use the “move to” command for the left mouse button/primary keybind.

Nicky hoisted his legs over the side of the boat and took his first wobbly steps on dry land in days. Stretching his back, he took a look around at the place… Small, quaint, and nice little fishing village… Or it wouldve been, if it hadnt been for all the bandits around…

Taunting the bandits as only an old salty sailor can, Nicky sauntered into the crowd of them, shouldering his shield before him like a badge of honor, the bandits taking one looked at it and dismissing its value- What could an old warped wooden shield like that possibly do?

Those were the last thoughts the bandits had, their stikes reverberating back into their arms, and tearing into their organs, the bandits keeled over and collapsed where they stood, their insides no longer functional. With the immediate threat handled, Nicky had to get his bearings… Ever a tenacious and astute explorer, he knew the element of surprise would suit him best. Were he to simply charge in-land, more bandits would be alerted to his presence, and he might find himself waking up to a dagger in his chest next he slept. He crept along the riverbed, and took his time slowly reaching a nearby summit from which he could assess the geographical landmarks and understand his current location.

Looking at his map, he appeared to be in what was known as the “shaded basin”… It made sense, he had wandered for several hours after all. If he followed the nearby trails, he could likely reach Homestead by Midnight. He kept moving, this time stopping when he happened upon a hill with the most curious discovery…

At the base of the hill there were at least 30 carcasses of dead Briarthorn being feasted upon by indigenous wildlife. Nicky slipped past, and found what surely must have been the culprit of the massacre at the top, laid out, naked but for a loincloth, and fast asleep. A hammer rested upon the ground nearby, the setting sun glinting off its mighty mass. The fates had smiled upon ol’ Nicky once again, it seemed, and he hefted the hammer upon his shoulder, walking off with his first piece of merchandise…

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To commemorate the occasion, he took out his bottle of Burrwitch Brew and drank deeply. Ah… Now here was a drink that bit back! He would have to share this with Garrund when he finally met him once again, if he was still alive…

Nicky “Rum Runner” Kotch

STAY TUNED FOR NEXT TIME…

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What are you using for your character chats? like …

If these chats are already in-game, then I have never seen them and must have missed this NPC after many hours of play.

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https://grimdawn.gamepedia.com/Sewer_Hideout

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Live and learn every day in this game - I have never seen that character lore before - dunno how I have missed it.

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Garrund is sort of a throw back I think to first act Ulgrim where he’ll tell you all sorts of tales if you eat some of his soup.

Yeah man I have been digging around for the most interesting nuggets in this quest to build lore based NPCs in order to participate in this style of gameplay to the max. Ive found some others as well but havent figured out how to fit them in, plus I am only running one classless build at a time until it dies and then I move on to the next, since its HC. Nicholas Kotch is an exception because I really really really need better gear and for that I need a safe build that can farm SoR in the very least, but ideally the entire game.

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DEVON THORMANE MAKES DUE WITH SUB-PAR EQUIPMENT AS HE CONTINUES HIS SEARCH FOR LONGSHORE, AND HIS HAMMER

Thormane could hear the wretched scavengers below, scrabbling about, feasting on the day old carcasses of the Briarthorn hordes hed slain. He looked around now, not for his Hammer- as it had been stolen- but for anything he could use as a means of armament in the immediate moment. The rocky sandblown crags of Pine Barrens had little and less to offer in the way of materials which could be weaponized, unless he meant to pelt his enemies to death with twigs and pebbles.

Twigs though… Perhaps he was onto something there… There were trees, sparse but present none-the-less… Could it work? Reaching up to a nearby pine, Thormane wrapped his hands around the lowest hanging branch and braced for resistance before lurching back to wrench the branch free. The branch crackled and fell away, offering none of the anticipated resistance, and sending Thormane toppling to the ground, his footing and balance overcompensated in the wrong direction.

Rising to his feet once again, he dusted himself off, wondering if the branches up higher held any more strength than those down low. Reaching up to yet another branch, he tested its mettle. At his slightest pullings, he could hear the fibers begin to crack and tear away. It was no good. The wood was too dry here. He would have to find materials some other way.

After some time wandering the hillside, Thormane was eventually able to locate some old wood, what looked to be part of a wheeled cart, discarded by some travelers previous who had met an unfortunate end, it seemed. This wood was old, but cured and made for weight bearing, it was sturdier than the dried pines, and he hastily fashioned himself a shield and bludgeon out of it, employing a small degree of weapons crafting that he’d learned from the Immortal Smithy as one of Lokarr’s pets in the Crucible Realm.

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Armed once again, Thormane set to his task once more- to comb the Pine Barrens and its surrounding regions in search of his Hammer. If it could not be found, he would continue on his route to Homestead. An unfortunate loss, to be sure, but not one that would keep him from his quest. Lokarr’s eyes were everywhere, and he would rather be spied hammerless on-task, than caught floundering about the wilderness aimlessly.

This time, Thormane met stiff resistance, not from Briarthorn, but rather from their Groble worshiped equals, the Dranghoul. Thormane was not the average unwary traveler, however, and gave the Dranghoul the fight of their life, sliding in low and fast, the sturdy timber bludgeon spiked with rusty nails that Thormane had coated in festering Briarthorn excrement (to inflict infection in the bloodstreams of his enemies) punched a small cluster of holes in the beasts vulnerable underbelly, loosing blood and causing infectious chain reactions to begin;

The beast stumbled, staggered by the sudden flood of toxins in tis bloodstream. Though more resilient than most, the Dranghoul’s bloodstream was an eager host to the viral contaminants, and slowed its reaction speeds. Thormane took advantage of the lumbering behemoths lethargy, sending a brutal backhand attack across its face and tearing open wounds;

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Shouting in anger, the Dranghoul worked its courage by releasing primal bellows, and readied itself to retaliate in kind. Thormane fired back with bellows of his own, and raised his shield arm, bracing for the blows. As he did this, he wound his right arm back to deliver a devastating strike to the beasts eyes…

…but seeing the creature shift its weight in anticipation of the overhand strike, Thormane instead dropped his center of gravity low, shifting his own weight to instead release a savage underhanded attack, dragging the rusty filth of his makeshift weapons nails upwards across the beast’s exposed underbelly once again!

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Stumbling back two steps, the beast had had enough, and lunged forth to take off Thormanes head with its left arm sickle… But Thormane twisted away from the blow, pulling his left shoulder back and pivoting to the side on his hips, while pushing the monster’s arm away from himself!

Thormane drove his right arm in fast and hard, delivering a crushing impact to the beasts underbelly for the third time. The beast, however, already leaning in for the kill with its right arm, could not stop itself- its massive weight the only force still carrying the blow forwards, directly into the attack…

Thormane saw the haphazard strike coming a mile away, and shot his shield arm out to deflect it. The full force of its impact sending the Dranghoul reeling away, off balance…

Stunned for a moment too long, the Dranghoul could do nothing while Thormane sent a ripping wound up the inside of its exposed underbelly, for the 4th and final time.

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The beast fell away, its defiled blood pouring out of its abdomen in seeping currents, and Thormane strode off, to continue his search…

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Jane of the Crossing earning her “Board and Lodging” in Malmouth before her push to destroy the Flesh Shapers and their despicable factory.

Creed suggested cashing in on some of the bounties Malmouth has to offer as a way to get extra resources and reputation. Ok then, lets see what they have got to offer …

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Typical of Creed, he knows that lightning is an old long lost fear of mine. Deep down though I personally still get shivers and anguish from it. I know that Creed is training me to face and defeat my fears, but a monster called “Stormtitan”?

Really! - I am sure this is going to involve a lot more more than just snowflakes and icicles.

However, I am in desperate need of resources, so let’s go for it.
Thanks again Creed - “Luv ya to pieces”.

Was not too long before I encountered some assholes dealing out some very bad aggressive aether attacks.

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Aether don’t scare me now, so goodbye to you and your devious sidekicks.

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Still looking for that Stormtitan …
This creature does not quite seem to fit the bill , but it is in my way

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No incoming lightning also gives me a warm fuzzy feeling - all out attack …


No matter
Cut a long story short, they all went down
Stormtitan - I am coming for you

Someone mentioned he likes to frequent the docks

That someone was right, here is the SOB
I need to get close to him to maximize damage

Close …
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Closer - Kilrian I need your fire …

Whoops - Did I mention I used to have a phobia about lightning? … RUN
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WAKE UP - As Creed has now trained me - Put all fears aside and tackle them full face on …

You are going down monster - Attack with confidence and extreme prejudice …

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Bit of a mess on the floor, but I am sure that is the least of the dock’s problems.
Creed had better have some good beer waiting for me at Steelcap after this little exercise.
No doubt he still has lots in store for me.

Although I think Korinia may have some far more reaching challenges …

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DEVON THORMANE CONTINUES HIS SEARCH; FOR HIS HAMMER, AND FOR FREDERICK LONGSHORE.

Fighting his way across the landscape, Thormane felled his enemies by the hundreds, turning the sands red with their blood. Piling the bodies to knee level, he waded through their mass, a battlefield of lost souls, littering it with the mutilated corpses of grobles and dranghouls alike.

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This proved to be no easy task, for no sooner had he charged into battle had he found himself braving a sea of lesser foes to be met by packs of Manticores, who came prowling out from behind boulders and burst forth from the bone formations of their long dead giant ancestors. Their razor sharp claws tore at him while their stabbing tails skewered the air, attempts to impale him sailing wide, but no less deadly.

The fighting was so thick that Thormane lost all sense of time and direction, and it seemed to him that he was being herded towards something, somewhere. A primal hive mind was at work here, behind the scenes, in communication with the Manticores. Thormane could recognize it in the movements of the beasts, their sporadic attacks shifting, re-aligning, their formation in constant flux yet somehow artfully cohesive.

He had seen this kind of phenomena before, fighting against other monsters in the Crucible pits. This was no different. The Manticores were being directed, their Alpha surely somewhere close at hand. They were forcing him towards it. Thormane vented his frustration on the Grobles, who were emboldened by the presence of their beastkin, skulking close enough to draw blood. A reaching thrust sent one Grobles skull exploding outwards, which cowed the others.

The push continued. He did not fight against the current- he would need that energy to face whatever lay in waiting. Instead, he let the wall of beasts pressure him closer to the Alpha. Mogara was its name, though Thormane did not know it at that time. He would discover this fact later, after suffering grievous wounds.

As the battle heightened, its stage moving across the waste in furious bloody tendrils, the air filled with throaty cries and bestial grunts, and he fought on. As he reached the peak of the hill he saw it- a hulking Manticore with muscled skin the color of dried blood, torn by stripes of yellow. Its maw was big enough to swallow his torso whole. Battering the weaker minions away, he prepared himself for death. It would come, either for him or for the Alpha.

The Alpha wasted no time on preparations, its anticipation of this fight had kindled as it waited for its minions to send Thormane quarreling up the hill into its thirsty claws. By the time hed reached the peak, its bloodlust had become a fiery inferno. It dashed into action, reaving the air with fierce sweeping displays of aggression, the sun catching on its talons, glinting speckles of taunting doom…

…only to be brought to a crunching halt by Thormanes makeshift shield. Swipe after swipe, he deflected the blows, each one more brutal than the last. The talons slowly began to shred at the wood- he could not risk losing his only baricade, and stepped forward unexpectedly, slamming it into the beasts hideous face, dead center. Mogara loosed a howling cry and reared up on its hind legs, swiping madly in a flurry of blows before dropping down on its haunches and preparing to pounce or skewer.

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As the battle raged on, some nearby Dranghoul bounded over to join the fray, eager to spill the blood of human and Manticore alike. Thormane had thought the Briarthorns were tough, but the Dranghouls were far worse- these monsters were more resilient, and wore armor, wielding brutal weaponry and an unparalleled bloodlust. Thormane whipped at them with the jagged poisoned spiked of his makeshift club in between his blunt ramming attacks to Mogara’s face, smashing the skulls of the now insignificant groble foolish enough to wander into the fray.

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A few well placed strikes of his club had the Dranghoul moving sluggishly, the contaminants working their way through the beasts bloodstream. While the Dranghoul floundered, Thormane was free to bring his full focus onto Mogara, who was now possessed by battle-fury. It bounded over and clamped its iron jaws down upon Thormane’s leg. The pain was excruciating, but Thormane knew he must endure it- were he to drop his defenses, the beasts would surely tear him apart.


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Struggling across the hilly peak, he wrestled with the beast before wrenching his leg free, trying to put some distance between them, Mogara’s claws wildly slashing in an attempt to snare him. Blood poured from Thormane’s wounds, and he scrambled to regain composure following the devastating wounds.

The Alpha had dogged him long enough, and it was time he ended this. Thormane inched back, up the hill, fending off Mogaras savage blows one after another until he could inch back no further. His back was now up against a large rock formation and he had little room to work with, but he had the high ground and in an opportune moment just as Mogara hunkered down to pounce, Thormane slammed his heel down on the top of the monster’s undefended head, feeling its skull crumble apart with jagged snaps and pops.

Thormane exhaled, and leaned back against the rock, holding his side where Mogara had dealt him a near mortal wound. The beast let out a repulsive low whine and he watched it roll away down the hill, limbs limp, the life leaving its body. It tumbled into the Dranghoul, who was by this time recovering from the poisonous strike Thormane had dealt it earlier. The Dranghoul, nearly knocked over by the unexpected corpose that came wheeling down the hill, knocked it away and loosed a bloodcurdling roar. Thormane understood the roar for what it was- he needed to leave, now. It was calling to its beastkin- signaling them.

Gripping his side, Thormane broke into a light jog- He would need to put some distance between the Dranghoul and himself if he wanted to bandage his wounds properly. Diligent in his task, he managed to outpace the Dranghoul, but not its cries. It was not long before he heard more Grobles and Dranghouls in the distance, matching their beastkin clarion call. This was bad. If he got pinned down and swarmed by these foes while he was injured and out in the open he would be overrun in mere moments. He needed to get to a more defensible location.

It didnt take long for Thormane’s jog to turn into a brisk walk. He was re-tracing his steps through the Pine Barrens and into the Shaded Basin, grateful not to have to face the Briarthorn once more, when his walk began to slowly become a stagger. Holding his hand out against the nearby rocky cover, he looked down and saw his lower abdomen and right leg were soaked in blood- his blood. He needed to stop the bleeding, and fast.

Sticking his neck out around the rock, he searched the horizon for signs of a suitable place to hunker down and bind his open wounds. There was what appeared to be an old fort- sturdy enough to provide decent cover- cover enough to weather the storm of scions that now hunted him. The bad new was, it looked as though he’d have to fight through them to reach safety, no matter which direction he went. Might as well head for the more suitable destination, then.

The battle cries were no longer noise, no longer some external part of the world, easily separated from the bodies they originated from. No. They had become enmeshed within the fiber of all, an adhesive to the writhing mass of bloody organics, the tornado of limbs and barbed teeth, Thormane jostled through its corpulent form lashing out at anything that moved. He had learned how to generate the noise. All he need do was swing his barbed club and shoulder his shield around, and it would spew into the atmosphere, heralded by a crimson tide.

Throngs of the enemy had met him in a tsunami of swords and cinders as he approached the massive structure, led by an eager Dranghoul who had rushed forward, grappling Thormane with one arm whilst attempting to spear him using the crude weaponry attached to his free arm. As Thormane fought the beast off, he had suffered many hits from the horde frothing around the edges of the Dranghoul at its vanguard. His body was numb and raw, pink and brown and black and blue all over from absorbing impacts and enduring cuts and stabs, his smithing armor singed from burns.

The Groble tribe of the Emberclan was indigenous to this region, and it just so happened that they were shared inhabitants of the fort alongside the Dranghoul. “Lovely” Thormane had thought when his breastplate had absorbed the first of many shots fired from their flaming guns. By now he could no longer distinguish burn from cut, and cut from bruise. His entire body was wracked in pain, and yet he fought onward, surely driven by some otherworldly source of power, for any mortal man would have fallen after being mauled by Mogara. Yet here he was, wading through the battle like a walking pillar of rusting iron, bringing crushing poisonous death to his foes.

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When the Dranghoul fell, Thormane figured he would be spared some relief- only cannon fodder remained besides, these Grobles, their numerous presence the most threatening thing about them. As he fought his way further he passed beneath the hold’s main gate …into a courtyard bristling with more Grobles and Dranghoul.

Thormane knew his mistake as soon as he saw not only were they superior in numbers, but tactical positioning as well, for they had the sense to station their ranged fighters on the high ground, where they were free to rain death down upon him. Realizing his folly, Thormane turned his assault aside abruptly, causing the ebb and flow of the battle to squeeze around him like a snake through thick mud. He pried for freedom, thrusting club and shield before him and pushing away hard, spreading his arms apart to part the veil of combatants before him. A fast glance showed his exit had been cut-off, an entire squad of fresh enemies rushed in under the arches of the hold’s entrance and barred his path.

Just then a blade struck him under his chestplate, a lucky strike from somewhere behind him or to his right. It was hard to know. A second blade shot out of a heap of clutching arms, slitting the wrist open on one of them before finding purchase in Thormanes bicep. He shouted out in pain, his arm no longer having the strength to force the wall of fighting bodies apart. Drawing his arms back abruptly, the Grobles were unable to compensate for the sudden loss of support and fell into eachother, arms and legs flailing violently to regain their balance but failing to do so without their weapons gripped in the hands, half of them fell to friendly fire within seconds.

With the horde stunned and shocked at Thormane’s resolve, many of them scattered-Their Dranghoul captains no longer breathing and their confidence soaked away like the blood of the slain beasts in the dirt. Thormane charged on, into the hold, headstrong and determined, his battle-fury in full swing, bloodied but unbowed, and eager to dispatch those in his path

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Now delirious from all the blood loss, Thormane fought with the last ounces of his strength. He understood his life was at an end, he would die here in this dungeon, his life the price of his foolish notion that there might have been safety within.

The beast towered over him, each strike drawing more blood. Its blades seemed to absorb it, transfusing it into the creature and empowering it with more and more furious attacks… However, Thormane’s contaminated club had taken its toll, and it wasnt long before the monstrous fiend began to lose its balance, stumbling and staggering into the walls and sending small debris falling from the rooftops. It was in a moment like this that Thormane sent his last consious ounce of strength into his final blows

The beasts chest broke open with a flash, its intestines pouring out, thick as boa constrictors, decomposing and dissolving, the effects of the contaminents from Thormane’s bludgeon at work. It stumbled, and fell backwards. Thormane watched in shocked disbelief, the creature dying before his eyes was the largest and most deadly he had ever faced.

And then it all went black. Thormane collapsed, unconscious from the strain of the continued battle…

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